i care

tell me something..lol

you say you love him
i smile.
i break.
you say he's you're life.
i chuckle.
i bleed.
when will you ever notice?

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

i'll tell you something, you've got the groove

[Robin]

like a back rub after you have laid in the sun all day ....

i like it

[Onyx_Rayne]

Very beautiful and, at the same time, very sad.

These words give life to a heart breaking.

"you say you love him
i smile.
i break."

Absolutely beautiful :)

[Roselyn]

This is beautiful... Nice work.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. So deep and heartfelt. Good job :)