heart drenched

dunno..lol..

Send me some lovin'
no matter where you are.
Give me some hopin'
I don't care how far.

I'll send you a kiss
coz' it's you i miss.
I'll give you my heart
eventhouhg were far apart.

Reviews

[Revolved]

The writing is good itself. But the writing needs work. Words are misspelled and you need to work on capitalization. Great writing. It is very excellent and loved the first stanza and how you started the poem. :)

Sorry about the criticism, but everyone needs it to become better :D

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Ah~I love this Heich~it's so very sweet :)))

james miles

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Hallmark need I say more?

[Randolf Ramos]

short but lots of emotion conveyed!
You are a lover and a writer of poem!
Keep it up!

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short and sweet just the way I like it. Favorite! (:

[Marianne]

Very sweet, and I like the urgency within the brevity !!

It's beautiful :)

[Neisha Ann]

I really like this! I can relate.

[Onyx_Rayne]

Very sweet - filled with love and romanticism.

It never matters how far we are from the ones we love, we can always feel the vibes they send us.

Great job :)

[RTB]

thats a cool long distance relationship poem very cute and creative

[Andrew Wright]

Short sweet, and certainly to the point. Two thumbs up for sure. Just watch for the typos

[Sonali]

even though we're far apart---typos but your poems r getting better.Keep the simplicity! great write. :)