Butterfly

My first try at a Haiku.

Graceful Red Butterfly.

      Hidden woods. Filled with emotions. Paper

                               Grace rainbows.  Revenge!

Author's Note

Master Cryptic
Mar 9, 2011

* A Cryptic Message

Butterfly

DELIGHTFUL
Jun 22, 2011

* BUTTERFLIES
* Butterfly

Reviews

[MandaBear]

very cool :) and butterflies are my favorite so it makes it even better!

[PyroKitty24]

Very nice, especially for a first try~

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Beautiful poem :)

[spicedrop]

I am a butterfly lover and like the colors you used in your writing- they gave the poem some drama and emphasis. I am, however, a little bit confused by the last word... maybe I just don't understand it?

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Wow! So beautiful with a surprise ending!

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beautifully phrased..although I think for haiku you may have to many syllables..the colours really pick out the words..nice work

[Brookell▲]

Although very short, reading it I could almost feel the emotion coming through the words overwhelming and brisk. I really like it and I can honestly say your great. Surely the first poem of yours i've read but definitely not the last.

[Magdelena]

Youzer!!! Intense and perfection.. Now this I liked!!!!


Mags xx

[trainwreck]

Lovely and beautiful.

[diannesam]

I love this poem. So simple yet so intense :)