Samantha's Story Pt. 1

A story in poem about a lost, dead girl.

Samantha’s End

 

Gone within the night.

“Thee be missed,” Said the priest

Death isn’t the end

Author's Note

1.Top Haiku
Dec 1, 2011
Haiku Contest

2. Best
May 15, 2012
P-O-E-T-R-Y

Reviews

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

What a scintillating piece...

[FocusedAmnesia]

Nice read. Love the last line

[Valette]

Interesting start for a story of the afterlife, or of reincarnation. One thing- "When a statement inside the parenthesis is the start of a sentance," said is not capitolized. Hence, the coma- don't capitolize the letter after the quotation mark in a continuation.

[Tina Kline]

These three lines have quite the impact. Impressive and the last line is so true, death is not the end. I like this, nicely done.

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

"Death isn’t the end." So true! :)

[brenda]

short but amazing nice write !:)

[a burnt omelette]

Samantha would be found again someday. Nice poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem with a complete story in 14 words. We hope death is not the end? A excellent poem.
Coyote

[frozensakura]

very short but very good (: