Samantha's Story Pt.3

Samantha’s Hope

 

Owls scream into the night.

Leaving those with dwelling might

 

Their hearts are filled with fright

They need someone to take them to the light

 

Happiness lets them fly like kites

And this they have sight

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

I like the simplicity of the words but the complexity of the tale. Not many writers can create stories with so little. Good job:)

[MandaBear]

How wonderful. A very enjoyable poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feeling of fear and concern at the beginning of this poem. Quite a tale in so few words. You are a very good writer. I did like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Journey from the darkness to the light. How wonderful. A very enjoyable poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For some reason, I find myself on the edge of twilight with this piece, well done, good read.