Patience

a little sweet piece of positivity

Inside the park where wisterias grow,

there is always a pure soul waiting to help,

thousands go there,

come back pieced in two.

Only one blessed soul can make it to the last moon.

And the questions answered could change the life,

only if somebody has that patience to strive.

Author's Note

Imagine yourself on a walk in a long park with beautiful fragrance, with a heart seeking for some soul to help and find what you're looking for in your life, you'll be tested, to pass, all you need is patience. This is all what I've written in my poem. Tell me in the reviews if you like it, i'll be waiting to read! :)

Reviews

[Orphic dreamer]

The Amount of aesthetic embellishment instilled in each line is fascinating to read. In such few lines you were able to cultivate a profound message and add beautiful imagery at the same time. That is an insane talent, only quite a few poets own.

[grace]

I am so contented that you liked it! Thank you so much for saying that! Your review made my day!

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Sometimes we need that walk to rediscover ourselves...I do it when I need a me-time!It's rejuvenating.

Nice poem Grace

[grace]

Thank you so much for appreciating it!!

[Kerra]

This is a wonderful write, very beautiful write

[grace]

Thank you so much Kerra! :)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This is a beautiful poem Grace. Takes the reader on a spiritual journey perhaps to self discovery or their better humanity. Thank you for sharing your art in words.

[grace]

Thank you so much for saying such beautiful words for this piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

I wonderful poem shared dear Grace. You create mystery, beauty and wonder.
"Only one blessed soul can make it to the last moon.
And the questions answered could change the life,
only if somebody has that patience to strive."
I liked the energy of the above lines. I agree. We must strive toward calm and peace to find. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[grace]

I am flattered! Thank you so much dear Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Grace.

[Savannah Gossett]

This is an amazing poem. I almost feel like I can see myself in that position. I love you you used few words to describe your thoughts. It is an amazing piece.

[grace]

Thank you so much Savannah! :)