Mistakes

laying on the ground,

i looked into the sky,

i saw lightning,

i saw thunder,

i saw darkness,

it was kinda horrifying me,

but as soon as i felt the raindrops on my face,

it made me comfartable,

i dont know what i felt in those drizzles,

the cooling of the rain was giving me warmth,

and now all in those grey clouds,

i could find some light, 

i could find a face,

which blown me into the ground,

with all the mistakes i made...

"The silence before the storm,

the guilt under the satisfaction." 

Author's Note

When you try to hide you pain to yourself, this is what it feels like.
Tell me what you think about my poem?

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, once more you show your poetic grace in this wonderful write. You paint such powerful images through your wonderful words. Your songs ever hold deep meaning. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[grace]

how sweet! thank you for making my day better everytime with your beautiful comments!

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, you are ever welcome. You can make words sing. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Mackenzie]

This is beautiful! I love it so much!

[grace]

Thank you so much Mackenzie!

[TheEvilSoul]

HOW IN THE WORLD ARE YO SOO GREAT!! OH MY GOD, LESSONS PLEASE? I LOVE THAT CONCLUDINGG LINEEE!!!!!!

[grace]

OH MY GOD M CRYING!! HOW IN THE WORLD ARE YOU SO NICE!! Thank you so so much for reading it, it feels so nice I SWEAR!!