Bounded line

posing like a saint through the busy daybreak 

slow waves got you wondering low

another eye lowering through the floral street

blur barons wandering wonder about you 

lavender petals falling on the cobblestones

settled on steps in sets sent serene as sapphires

the life in me lost with water running further and close

the beauty comes in as the light through a cracked crevice

this glow turns all the hatchets to sparkly wands

it makes me outgrow my cliffs larger than thorns

flickering shadows covers up the silent storms 

i thought i was coming for it, way before it was gone 

the marvelous chandeliers can shatter in just a heartbeat

the rain stops to take the thrill away from the hometown street

dust and dust over the smell i sense while in discreet

gates closed, no more uninvited guests in my head i'd please

windows open and closed vision to feel touch

chilled cheeks under night sky on a four wheeled bus

still life sometimes balanced well on a thin line 

and a circus for a matter of a sunrise but beyond my bounded line

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Grace, this is amazing poetry, your words sing into the soul and they paint such strong visions. Each line is to be savoured as your words flow easily down the written page. Your creativity shines true in this wonderful write. May your heart ever sing. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs always....Mike.

[grace]

Thank you so much for such warm reviews! Reading them brought a good energy! Hugs from me too :)

[shadrach hah]

You are always welcome Grace. Your words flow so easily and creatively. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved how you used the language dear Grace.
"lavender petals falling on the cobblestones
settled on steps in sets sent serene as sapphires
the life in me lost with water running further and close
the beauty comes in as the light through a cracked crevice"
The above lines. Are amazing. I could write a epic story from. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[grace]

Thank you so much for appreciating dear Coyote!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Grace.

[K writes]

This is so wonderful, Enjoyed this write

[grace]

Thank you so much for reading it :)

[Orphic dreamer]

This is immensely beautiful. The intricate details that are interwoven in each line and majestic imagery accompanying it are beyond mindblowing.
“lavender petals falling on the cobblestones
settled on steps in sets sent serene as sapphires
the life in me lost with water running further and close
the beauty comes in as the light through a cracked crevice”
These lines are criminally powerful and so uniquely beautiful.

[grace]

Oh my god, your extremely generous reviews made me smile so big! Thank you so so much for appreciating my piece!! I will forever be grateful!!