The sapphire glow

"i'll be here, even when no one ever will"

Waves racing the shore,
I watch them as they come and go.
Some pave their way and win,
Some fade away with the wind.

Yet some fleeting moments linger as they be,
Ephemeral like the sun meets the sea,
Those memories in minds sing like sirens,
Holding us captive in the azure silence.

Our lives, just like ships passing in the night,
Entwined in the tapestry of fate and chance,
And so as they unravel after a stolen glance,
Somehow, their scent envelops our essence.

From the dark abyss to the light of dusk,
I swam and drifted against the currents.
The wanderers that wove my bones got faded into the mist of blues,
But their relics anchored me to the shore.

Sometimes low as seashells sunken in the sand,
Longing at the harbor for the ships to land.
But i know they'll never come. Oh, i know they won't,
Yet i'll be here, i'll be here by the ocean's sapphire glow.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

Your words are beautiful, your imagination, use of words, so mature, Impressive, you can write, oh yes you do.
Do more, write more, grow and be a wonderful poet

[grace]

Thank you so much for encouraging me to write more. I am really grateful to you, and i'm glad that you read it and enjoyed it!

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful meditation on the transience of life and the power of memory to anchor us to the past. The image of waves racing the shore is powerful, and it reinforces the idea that life is constantly in motion and that we are all subject to the whims of fate and chance. The idea that some fleeting moments linger in our minds like sirens is also striking, and it suggests that memories can be both beautiful and dangerous, as they can hold us captive in the past. The image of ships passing in the night is also powerful, and it reinforces the idea that our lives are interconnected and that we are all part of a larger tapestry of fate and chance. The final lines, "But I know they'll never come, oh I know they won't, yet I'll be here, I'll be here by the ocean's sapphire glow," are poignant, and they suggest that even though life is transitory and uncertain, we can still find solace and beauty in the present moment. Overall, your poem is a well-crafted and evocative work that celebrates the beauty and wonder of life, even in the face of uncertainty and transience😊.

[grace]

That's a really thoughtful and insightful review! It's clear that you took the time to read my poem carefully and think about its themes and imagery. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your kind words. It's always encouraging to hear that my work has resonated with someone. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me!

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

You're very welcome! I'm glad that my review resonated with you and that you appreciated my thoughts. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. By the way, if you're interested, I'd love for you to check out some of my own poems and let me know what you think.