The Alterated Puzzle

The different pieces of puzzle put together makes the picture perfect. In the same way people distinct from one another makes the world a better place :)

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Seven billion people in seven distant lands,

Scattered as products of desolate brands.

We are the puzzle pieces, distinct from each,

As leaves give beauty to an evergreen beech.

Different pieces of puzzle, put into a frame,

Individual piece have no identity or name.

Together we build in solitary perfection,

A humane beauty beyond perception.

Author's Note

Point out the grammar mistakes, if any, I dont know if there is/are :P Writer's block after 8 lines :P dunno what to add further :P

Reviews

[richieb]

What you have written is very good. If your poem needs to be longer, your thoughts will take you there. I listen to a lot of music and many times the words I am looking for come to me through the music's rhythm. Your poem is strong enough on its own if you choose to leave it as is.
Richie.

[unfathomd]

Hello richieb, Well im tryna do that. It works for certain topics.. not for all. What you told is true imagination is the foundation. Thanks for the review :)