the unforgiven

Cinquain

im the  

 unforgiven  

 lost in a world so cold      

 never had a chance to prove myself    

not once

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Great job at a cinquain, nicely worded.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks. Cinquains were all I used to do.

[Mazie Tackett]

No offense this may not be what you want to hear but no one gna give a chance to prove yourself you have to do it yourself you haVe to work your tail off to make your own chance and If your lost ask for direction I'm sure someone will even if its a complete stranger don't give up every there's something waiting to be discovered

[Harley.B]

hang in there fellow Harley!

- HARLEY.B

[Priscilla Sayers]

And yet, here you are writing, proving that you can. You have and it was a good write!