from this day fourth

1 against the world

from this day fourth i will not falter.  

 from this day fourth i will try harder.

  i will not be stopped by the challenges i face.  

 i will beat death in its manic race.  

 if my time is running short i will power through.  

 but my darling none of this is for you.    

 i do this for me and my own gain.    

 for the only feeling in my life is pian.

Author's Note

Little weird inspiration. The game HALO. How one spartin is their only hope and etc. Should play it sometime. Also by the stuff I feel right now too.

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Haha, great job! Awesome rhyme scheme and flow, needs a little grammer and punctuation corrections, also in the last line it should be pain, but overall great poem. Nicely worded.

[Mazie Tackett]

OK...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................uMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................I like the poem but where the inspiration came from is a little weird