Inside

Behind my kind smile.

 there is a black abyss.  

 

 Im nice to other people.

 but i dont really get that kind of nice in return.    

 

My eyes have adopted a gray tint.

 their the only hint.    

 

 Of how much i hurt inside.

Reviews

[Mazie Tackett]

Then don't be nice lol pretty good poem not my favorite not even close if I'm being honest this one doesn't even compete with the others I'm tired so if these reviews sound stupid I'm sorry and if they're like miss a couple like a few words here and there I'm soRry for that too on all the reviews I'm doing them all at once so bback to the poem it alright but I like your first 5 before this one better maybe work on it a little bit that's what I suggest anyways if someone's mean to you then smack up side the head don't deal wit just hit they'll stop:)