forgiveness

I forgave. Now its your turn

I was,  

 A kid traded,  

 for a truck after that,  

 I survived and built anger,  

 and forgave

Author's Note

Cinquain. True story. Only a part of mine. Forgive people

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Another great poem by you! Keep writing!

[V]

This is interesting. keep writing.

[myrto]

Wow. How brutal and upsetting. Incredibly moving.

[Jeanette]

Forgiveness sets your free.
I'm here to listen.
=)

[Laura S.]

That beautiful yet really saddening. I love how despite the harsh situations, you still managed to forgive. Makes you a bigger and better person. Nicely done.

[Mazie Tackett]

YuP heard about that don't ask how or from where just know I know and I'm for if you need me by the way what's up with all the cinquains can u not write a regular poems(taunt taunt taunt taunting)haha(laughing laugh laugh laugh giggle) or a long poem(totally not taunt totally OH MY GOSH serious......sneaky giggle) I don't think u can write a good long regular rhyming poem to save your life you and your little 17 word poem any how I like how you wrote from something that was going on in your life to me it show that the actually means something to you its not just a bunch of words on a piece of paper it shows you care about what you wrote its something I think every writer should do almost all mine are I don't know about most but I find it very important in the work of a poet congratulations