circle of emotions

What goes around comes around

love brings hurt.

 hurt brings pain.

 pain brings anger.

 anger brings madness.

 madness brings sorrow.

 sorrow brings foregiveness.

 foregiveness brings trust.

 trust brings happyness.

 happyness brings love.

 love brings hurt. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cosmic kid]

I love the pattern of this, oh things turn out like that. Good job :)

[YourMajesty2102]

This is true its kinda of creepy how true it is but it all starts with love and ends with it too! Good Job!

[Aurora .I.]

This is so very, very true. But love doesn't... okay well it can bring both good and bad pain, depends. Good pain is when you worry about them and are constantly scared something is going to go wrong, bad pain is when they hurt you physically or emotional pain. But yeah, I guess either way it gives you pain. Anyway, this reminds me of a pin in my bathroom and that's why I laughed at it. Fear breeds hatred. Hatred breeds war. War breeds fear. Anyway good work! Looking forward to the next piece!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh! Journey taught me that the wheel in the sky keeps on turning and yes. Yet again I have gone through this cycle. Oh woe is me. If only the forgiveness could come sooner :'(

[SeventhSin]

This is so true! I really like how you used this specific circle and made it a poem. I really, really liked this :) Great job!