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Some contradictions. Inspired by the doors song "riders on the storm"

a dog without a bone,

 an actor on a loan,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a bird without is wings,

 collector with no things,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a car that dont got wheels,

 a junkie with no thrills,

 riders on the storm.

 

 a lover with no gal,

a friend without a pal,

 riders on the storm

Author's Note

Inspired by my random thoughts and a very good song "Riders on the Storm" by The Doors. It's not done yet. 1 how'd ya like it? 2 suggestions?

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

Interesting.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Forever Hidden]

^-.-^

[The Analog Kid]

Cool idea...This is how we do it:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah man. Thanks

[The Analog Kid]

YW

[Sam Gregory]

I like the contradictions in this, makes it very interesting :)

[A. V. Madison]

An unusual piece of dramatic writing. I like it.

[Lindsay T]

Beautifully written, unique as always :) Loved it!!

[afra]

good job ...its quite different ....keep writing

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks. I will!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

A without a bone reminds me of Pink Floyd, mostly Roger Waters singing: "And when I'm a good dog they sometimes throw a bone in." and your first line reminds me of that Pink Floyd song: "Nobody Home, "and ought to have Pink Floyd on that music list! Nonetheless, this is great.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Pink Floyd's Awesome. But the first sentence was taken right out of the doors song. Thanks for the review I love this new feature!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

There's a killer on the road, his brain is squirming like a toad. I love this song and I can't wait to see what you do with it when you've completed it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

If you give this man a ride, sweet family will die. Killer on the road. Yeaaaaaaah! I love the song man thanks for the review!

[Miranda Richard]

It's good, but you might want to capitalize some of it. Unless you like it the way it is.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Holy fiddlebiscuts this thing works. And Oh! I can't caps it. On a phone. Sites weird.

[Laura Maidah]

Wow. PM me with your every intention for this. You got better overnight! It goes SOOOOOO many ways, filled with profundities I'm not capable of ever grasping in a way. Even if you didn't mean all the possible interpretations, your take would certainly be interesting. The title is AMAZING. It's at the core of every symbol. WOW