Freight Train

A Screenplay by Adam Wieherdt

A young man dies only to find out the universe is stranger than it seems.

Pilot Episode

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5UNGmSp9IPHU0Q5T0k4c2ZjcjQ/view?usp=sharing

Episode 2

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5UNGmSp9IPHMklKWVY1T3VxaGM/view?usp=sharing

© 2016 Adam Wieherdt

Author's Note

I know I still have a lot to learn in the art of screenwriting, I'm looking for feedback on the story. ignore typo's and grammar problems.

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David Jae

The story work is excellent and you convey your ideas well. It would be well-received by any screenwriter.

Just one suggestion; when posting on Writer's Cafe, break it down into smaller chapters. It's a lot to read in one go.

You should be proud of this.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words. I struggle getting the images from my head onto paper and feeli.. read more

10 Years Ago

It does. You should be pleased with what you've achieved.

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David Jae

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words. I struggle getting the images from my head onto paper and feeli.. read more

10 Years Ago

It does. You should be pleased with what you've achieved.

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Added on May 31, 2015
Last Updated on February 26, 2016

Author

Adam Wieherdt

Oliver, British Columbia, Canada

About

I am a self taught writer which is a good and bad thing. I love making up new stories and creating new worlds. I published one book on relationships but then I decided I didn't want to go that route.. more..