Fading Innocence

This fading innocence

Is where we find ourselves at night

Trying so hard

To make this wrong a right

And when in fact we don't succeed

We lose our sense

To take the lead

I'm sorry dear let's face the truth

The time has come

We've lost our youth

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

i like the title... fading innocence...

[Wunderlich]

Another awesome poem. Good topic choice, nice flow and diction, good job.