Broken Home

My brother's left; he's gone for good

My parents split; misunderstood

Here i am, standing alone

To deal with the pain of a broken home

 

Days gone by; even years

My face been stained by many tears

I don't think you feel the way i do

I've had this habit, you never knew

 

The pain is gone, i'm numb inside

I'm sitting here; wanting to die

I can't move; i guess i'm stuck

My life is ending; i'm out of luck

 

The pills are gone; i'm passing out

i changed my mind; i try to shout

There's no more numb, no more pain

It's over now; i'm glad death came

Reviews

[elaine]

This is incredible. Hats off to ya.

[D.T.]

Love it. Absolutely love it! So raw and for me, it was very relatable. Great job!

[Alz Alz]

awe, wonderfully written :)