Bleed

Don't look at me and lie

I hate reality

I won't try

I know i fail to see

You can't save me

I'm scared beyond belief

I bleed away fears

And i sleep away the tears

So leave, just leave

Before i break

I can never bring together

My free floating thoughts

You can't save me

I'm too lost

I bleed away hate

And i sleep away sanity

So leave, just leave

Before i snap

And lash

And cry

And shake

I'll bleed

Reviews

[brittneymarie]

This was really deep and good

Great Write

,BrittneyMarie

[Calypso]

I liked how clear you was with the direction of the poem, but I think it needs to be more layered. Very good job nevertheless. Poetry is something great so never stop.