Things you have never felt

I feel…
    Powerless
    Weak
    Out of control
Helpless.

I feel…
    Empty
    Weak
    Losing control
Hopeless.

I feel…
    Hurt
    Weak
    With no control
Heartless.

I feel…
    Tense
    Weak
    Under your control
Emotionless.

I feel…
    Used
    Weak
    Too much control
Loveless.

I feel…
    Broken
    Displaced
    Angry
    And weak
Things you have never felt.
 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A tower of emotions

[reminder]

The structure really adds to the mood of desperation. I also like the repetition of weak". It reinforces your feelings. Well done!

[OR]

Nice piece
Peace!

[Brittany W]

I agree this is relateable, but you wrote it well, that each time she feels more pain and helpless, great work.

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wow, i can relate ..this is a great write