At Last

Now at last,

I'm gasping for breath,

Struggling to stay alive,

And my mind is a mess

I can't go on.

I won't make it through.

I'm not alright.

I can't fake this one too.

I've tried so hard

To make it through.

I wish I had some way

To get back to you.

Love was all I had,

And I shared that with you.

But that's in the past,

And that happiness is through.

Reviews

[JohnnyB]

What you have here is nice but it feels unfinished. I'm not understanding what is "at last" and what you're not able to fake too. I'd like to see more in this one.