What Went Wrong?

What Went Wrong?

What went wrong?

I ask myself as I wash

the blood from my hands

Had I lost my temper

and suddenly grabbed 

you 

Or did I finally lose

all that held me back?

My hands stink of 

blood from your veins

The water that cleanses 

me turns read as it 

goes down the drain

What went wrong?

What have I done?

Reviews

[heich]

questions...hmmmnnn

I like this, it really shows the realization of something horrible. Expresses the emotions well.

[StarryNights]

Good job, it shows the guilt and past anger of the person's actions

[kaffreen]

I like this (: I like the frantic thought process you've shown from the assumed murderer, simple but it still impacts. Good work x