Creep

***F**K THIS FEELING OF INADEQUACY!****

Creep

You're so beautiful

You're so special

I'm nothing to you

I'm nothing but a creep

Every chance I take

just to glance at you

even if it brings me pain

You're so perfect

You're so beautiful

I wish I was too

I wish I was special 

too

So we can be together

but we all know 

I'm nothing but a creep

Reviews

[Tim Piotrowicz]

totally familiar. keep writing, it really helps.

[Jesse N. Wall]

It's difficult for me to express the way your poem makes me feel. but
Don't let anything
Steal your mojo. keep pushing out the words brother

[Joshua Smit]

text colour is so bright... yet the poem is so dark, love the contrast there :D
it's amazing how we can build up such negative profiles of ourselves in our minds that we seem to always live up to, untill we realise that we can be something more we will always see ourselves as nothing and become what we believe we are....
brilliant poem

[*** Hey Jude***]

Your writing shows strong emotions through your special gift of writing! We can only allow others to judge, maybe you should be with someone that knows you are No creep. Keep the great work up. ~ Judi

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I don't know. Sometime we can get lucky. I believe woman have the power. When they decide they want you. Could be in the right place? When I was young. I was a math tutor. I was surrounded by pretty woman and couldn't have them. A outstanding poem.
Coyote