Sanity

In the confines of 

our mind we create

Sanity

Our own version of 

reality,made for our needs

A sanctuary from the 

madness of the world

Yet within the walls 

of this sanctuary

An all consuming 

darkness lays 

nestled within us

That try as we must 

can never be severed

The seed of madness and of sin

this darkness within us

Nestled within our 

very core

Reviews

[Muse]

It's amazing is it not? The power of our thoughts. We take it for granted. Our thoughts can lift us up...and they can destroy us. And who said what remains unspoken has no effect on us? I disagree......half-heartedly.

[Mauricio Montoya]

life will always be what we precieve.
great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Sanity is over-rated. I use to think about the logic of the world. Now I try to live each day with a purpose and try to be happy.
"An all consuming
darkness lays
nestled within us"
We can be consumed by many things. Better to do our best and hope for the best. A strong ending to a poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[OT]

ahh very nice - we all have that side - that dark glint in the eye - things are never one dimensional, with the good comes the bad and a multifaceted array of emotions and feelings!!

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

This is beautiful. You have a lovely way with words. This is true as well as a nice read.