Down That Road

Please read my poem and give comments as you see fit

Down That Road

Crying for today

Leaving a pool full of tears

Down that long road you've been

I'll still be waiting at the end

After you've shed your tears 

and loved others

I'll still be waiting at the end

Waiting for you to come back

Author's Note

Sorry for not uploading and reviewing your works in a while. I have been busy for my senior year in high school.

Reviews

[Tim Piotrowicz]

I dont know if I'd wait for someone who was busy loving others, but I guess maybe I just dont understand whats going on here. Too deep for me maybe ;) But well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

A kind promise. To wait for someone to return. I like the desire and emotion of this poem. Remind of a old man who said. You will return from where you have started. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote