Undone

Product of late nights and confused emotions

    UNDONE

I am destroying myself

Unhinging every fiber of my being

Inch by Inch

To what purpose do I do this?

NONE

I do it simply because

I CAN

and no one dare

 stop me 

Reviews

[Muse]

Scattered...fragmented thoughts. But that's a perfect example of how a person feels when overwhelmed and beyond any comprehension. And I love word play...you use it to your advantage here...to strengthen the message. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to be become undone. Hard to re-gain control and logic. I like the feel and the desire of this poem. Good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the format that you chose for this piece. I have felt like this before, and sometimes its nice to just stop caring for a moment and flail. Way to capture the primal emotions that rage in us all at times. Great write.