The end of session

This poem is about of a nostalgia. It talks about regret of a student for not utilising the time and asking himself to be a part of not.

The session is now at the end
The fourth passed present punched once again ,

Crossing the boundary eradicate with time
Not with the moment it flow on the life,

Whisper of sound is trace on the track
Which I had lack, which I had lack !!

I had achieve a way with lay,
Ignoring the shore of sunshine sunset in the day,
Pearls of sun is shining in the water ,
still working as a single minded,

The session is now at the end
Like a snowflakes melt in the hand,
Catching the fading light on the stage ,
But lose the sand in the hand ✋!!

The session will again at the end
The way it went is it will again the same and

Author's Note

It is my first poetry I had ever done so if there is a any kind of grammatical poetry devices mistake please ignore it and if you want to you can upload it

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

You need to be more coherent. That is all. Should be fine after you refine your craft. Keep it up man, it's going to be trash at the beginning so don't worry, it's like that for everybody. I still only make sense some of the time and I've been doing it for a while.