bliss me out

I float, I fly, I soar
With a glimpse of your adorable face
Add on that charming grin

I smile, I giggle, I laugh
With that thing you do
Go on, Tickle me to death

I sigh, I get lost, I melt
With words you could utter so well
Those eyes, they tell me more

I move, I groove, I'm astonished
You caught me in a daze
Fill me up with excitement

I crave, I yearn, I'm pleading
Bathe me with your love
Spoil me with your sweetness

I'm in luck, in love, in too deep
Going mad, almost crazy
It's exhilarating, breathtakingly sublime

Give me back my sanity
Otherwise, BLISS ME OUT!

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

Adolescent life, ah! I wonderfully enjoyed its bliss. The campus crushes, the infatuation is great.... It is once in a lifetime worth experiencing.

Great!

[Shin]

This poem is good, I like it, a lot of mixed emotions can be felt by reading this, great job.

[Numb]

A great, unique poem. I agree with dovetailer about the ending, but other than that it was very good.

~N~

[dovetailer]

I really enjoyed this poem... I think anyone can relate to the sentiments you express...love...lust...our obsession with them through our days...
Lovely... Personally, I wish your ending didn't break with the structure of the poem...but that is my preference...

[nono]

WOW! i love it completely unique and one of it's own. Really very nice job!