A Love That Could Never Be

Is it wrong to love you if you’re so far away?
To wish to hold you and ask if you’re okay?
When I call and you’re not there, it hurts,
I wonder if this relationship will work.
Day after day I picture your beautiful face,
and feel inspired to go on in the chase.
I love you so much, so much till I cry,
on the phone I hear your saddened sigh.
What do you see in me? You ask.
This is a love that could never be.
I’m here and you’re there, and your family hates me,
stop calling. Its over. Just live without me.
I cry and cry, day after day, night after night,
hoping and praying that you may change your mind.

Reviews

[the_stoic]

i have always maintained that complicated words and phrases aren't required to portray one's emotions and your write is another befitting example of that . simple words used as a means to bring out emotions from the core . the pain , the anguish and all the related feelings ~~ i know , i relate to and empathize cause i have and am going through the same . how we wish that they change their mind ... sighs..

[Cherry Blossom]

so sad but love the feel of it so much love and twist in this poem love it

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Awwwww so sweeet, and sad :')

[~Lizzy♬]

I really like this poem. Even though it has a sad romantic touch to it, it happened to me once and I can relate to every single word in this poem.