SCENT OF YOUR PERFUME

I am so happily doomed and groomed
By the enchanting scent of your perfume
You have such a wonderful bouquet
It doesth hold the spring Magnolias at bay,

The Empress Josephine* would have spent
Her country’s fortune to bare your scent
Pirre Magnol* would have lavished the same
Just to speak of what I pray to claim,

Your perfume is a Southern French delight
A mystic fragrance of attractive starlight
Your natural aroma is more of the same
My heart shall forever carry your sweet name.

Reviews

[Shin]

Wow, I love the rhymes! I especially love the ending!!

I love it. Very universal, and it gave me flashbacks.

[dovetailer]

ahhh..the aroma of a woman...
lovely poem...lovely rhyming...
Interesting how perfume smells differently on everyone...
the perfume applied is modified by her own scent to become something unique...
hers and only hers...for some lucky guy to appreciate...

[KaySea]

speechless

[Ian Faraway]

I love this poem, and I agree with Coyote. The scent of a woman is enough to keep us hypnotized for days. (Personal experience) Anyways, good write and good choice of words....but a question... why is there a '*' at the end of Magnol and Josephine?

[Coyote Poetry]

The sweet scene of a woman can leave us confused and content. I like the smell of a woman after a long bath. Her aroma can leave you wishing for more. I like the story and the ending. Your words were beautiful. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[the_stoic]

wow ! this was really phenomenal cause a small thing as a woman's scent (perfume) has been used as a muse to weave an entire poem . would have been easier had you added the significance of the * marked terms in the author's note . the rhyme scheme was sweet .