i was TRUE

i wasn't arrogant
i wasn't rude..
it was you who made me screw..

i said what i felt
i did what i want
my heart was pure but you made it untrue

i was happy
i was sad
but what ever i was..i was glad

i was true
i was me
but now i dream to be me

you will regret
you will pay
for what you did you will sustain..

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ralphy]

Wow, although emotional, and well written, I'm not sure I like what I heard. It really sounds as an unjustice was done here, to be yourself shouldn't come with a price...and for that, I'm truly sorry for the shame. I do know your poetry is outstanding, full of emotional wonders...I love the way you express each stanza and deliver the commanding tone. Speaking freely throughout each phrase, through the tears, and the drama...you have a wonder gift in writing...

[Honeypot]

This was wonderful and powerful. I think its pretty deep actually. "i was true
i was me but now i dream to be me" seems to me like you are saying that you were yourself, but its just a memory and now to struggle to let the true you out? Great job.

[Janice Ann]

Very well done! I thought it rough, raw and extremely real!

Good write!

Janice

[poetic soul]

emotions are intense...and raw.....frustration embossed very well...nice write....liked the rant...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[deeps]

Very emotional write here, some very strong and raw emotion, excellent flow to your words as well.

[Linda Stinson]

I have to agree with Ralphy, its sounds like an unjustice took place. You used powerful words to show this. Good work. Now go get him!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so raw, your words came here right from your heart!
And I guess, thats what made this poem so special.

[Anita B Jacques]

Good write, telling it like it is. It's tough to be yourself, and even tougher for others to accept it. Be true to yourself sweetie. God Bless you.
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