इन्द्रधनुष

jab andhere main dikhe indradhanush

toh dil ho jaae behad khush

aisa hi ek jalta diya hoo main

roshni dikhane aaya hoo main

main hoo khooli wadiyon ka banjara

jo dhoond raha hai saachai ka rasta

dil hai mera naadan awara

jo deta hai bas pyar ka wasta

me hoo woh tara jo jagmagade jag yeah sara....

Reviews

[Happy hours]

nice poetry...beautiful and meaningful lines

[vaishnavi]

thanks it was my first hindi work on this site so hope you enjoy it

[Avinash]

अंधेरे में इन्द्रधनुष देख पाना सिर्फ एक सुन्दर मन के बस की बात है।

[vaishnavi]

it is right
and glad u liked it

[Saddam]

dil hai mera naadan awara
jo deta hai bas pyar ka wasta
me hoo woh tara jo jagmagade jag yeah sara....

Haan ye hai behtar. Hindi mein jo mithas hai wo kahi aur nahi mil sakta. Ek umda quality ki kavita. Mera pasandida lines hai.

[vaishnavi]

oh thanks aacha laga yea jankar ki aapko ye kavita pasand aiye

[Parimal Pratyush]

To compare a rainbow to a candle is amazing. You really can think very deep. And to see a rainbow in the dark is so beautiful to imagine. A poet's freedom greatly exercised. :)

[vaishnavi]

thanks and glad u liked it
never had expected that it will be so good for others to read

[Utkarsh Singh]

bhut sundar likhi yaar ....really .,..... isse khety hai kavita .......a real one ...........phele mene chek k thi to hindi me thi n kafi error si lag rahi thi ....bt now these english letters look like hindi varmala ...........

[vaishnavi]

actually first i have posted it in hindi but when i saved it its letters was not good and clear so i deleted it and wrote it in new form so glad u liked it

[Utkarsh Singh]

pleasure was mine .........:)

[vaishnavi]

. ^_^