Toutes les Impasses

A Poem by Val Val

February 7, 2010 / 1:55 am

Yes. I will
Be a leaf in
The breeze.
Hopefully,
A healing
Wind flows
After me.

© 2010 Val Val

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Antonio Valentino

Yes, I am but a leaf that floats along the river life...

Short and sweet, very nice poetess.

Love your song list.
Antonio

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola Nation

leaves of Val...

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William 'Wulfy' Crowbou..

Simple yet elegant. Breaking up the lines into such short bursts gives extra weight to each word.

Posted 15 Years Ago

cest la vie

Beautiful, hopeful, definite :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago

Alicante lullaby

small,lovely,inshallah a healing breeze will flow after you,,,

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Don't email me and demand I read and review your work. It's bizarre. Wake me if you like me, Wake me if you want me, Wake me if you need another poem. L'original style, au-del du blah bla.. more..