Where do I belong?

this is another girl that also lost her memory but instead she was tortured, she doesnt know who she is, so they gave her a new life and name

Hello, my name is Shaihaisha Blackheart, but a lot of people call me "Shi". I am a student at Valtic High School in Tokyo, Japan, I only moved to Japan just two weeks ago. I live with my twin sister and my family in a very wealthy neighbor hood. My sister, Lenna, already made some friends at our high school while I didn’t, but my name is very well known there, I also was able to get into the most popular group in Valtic, some how they were able to convince the princepal that there wasn’t a need for uniforms for the rest of the student body, they only wanted the uniforms for themselves. So I had to wear a uniform, but it is really cool because a lot of people give me respect, besides being known for a movie. I am still physically fit from the movie, besides being called a pro in the martial arts, the sword fighting techniques, using the compound bow and arrows, knives, and guns. I am 5'7", I have cobalt blue eyes and gold-blond hair, my uniform is a purple-blue pleated skirt, a purple dress shirt, a blue vest, an untied purple tie, and blue leg-warmers and white sneakers. The group name is the Knight Club and the leader of this group’s name is Al Valtic, the grandson of the Headmaster of Valtic High, and the youngest son of Val Valtic, the movie director of Blackheart which I was acting the main character.

"Come on Heartless," said a girl at the bottom of the stairs, I look over the banister on the fourth floor and look at my "loving" sister, Lenna. "Lets go!" said Lenna as she taps her foot waiting for me. Lenna is 5'2" and weighs 110 lbs. Her hair is red and pulled up into pigtails and has blonde tips. She wears a purple and green lolita dress. She has no unquie abilities.

"Dont call your sister that, Lenna!" yelled a female voice from the kitchen, our mother is sitting at the kitchen table, with my new laptop and my new blackberry phone, the last two never survived my sisters wrath. Her name is Lisa Blackheart. The man at the counter wrapping up my lunch is our father, Roy Blackheart. Our parents are both actors, but Lenna is not an actress, shes just a spoiled brat livin' the good life.

"Comin, Brat-Rat!" I said as I get on top off the banister, and stand on it, I take a breath and jump, I land with my knees bent, just five feet away from my sister, I stand up and look up to the fourth floor and whistle softly, my pet black timber wolf with blue eyes walks up to the banister and looks down at me. then my fox and my tiger also come up to the banister, my tiger is holding my bookbag, and my fox is holding my keys. in their mouths. They open their mouths and drop them. I catch my book bag with my left hand and my keys with my right. My pets and I have the fourth floor all to ourselves because we cant bare to live in the same room with Lenna. My Grey Wolf comes from Canada and his name is Baltic, my siberian tiger comes from Russia, her name is Sasha, and my Red Fox comes from North America, his name is Valley. My parents do allow them to roam in the house as long as they dont tear anything up. But most of the time you will find them in my bedroom on the fourth floor, napping on my queen size canopy bed or on their own beds in their own rooms.

"I am not a brat-rat!" said Lenna very angry.

"Thanks Mom for getting me a new phone and laptop." I said to my mom sweetly as I pick up the laptop and put it into my bag, and my phone in is new phone case and into my bag also, I kiss my fathers cheek and take my lunch and also put it into my bag.

"Im glad you had every thing saved on an external hard-drive, or you would of been out of music and everything esle you survive off of. Just make sure they dont get stolen." she answered back calm.

"I will, Bye now we are off to school!" I said as I race to the door and open it.

"Shi, remember that your father and I wont be home for a couple of days! You are in charge and do what you want not what your sister wants you to do." said my mom as I am closing the door after my sister. "I know mom! As I closed the door my sister Lenna meets up with some of her friends as I walk down the stoned walkway, I slowly walk behind my sister and her friends, listening to their conversation.

"You will never guess what my sister did this morning when I told her to hurry up.." Lenna said

"What did your sister do?" asked a girl next to her. This girl stands at about 5'3", her hair is black and her eyes are green. Her physical body type is normal, nothing supernatural about her, for now.

"Leela, just guess." said my sister.

"Umm, I dont know, run down the stairs while saying wait up?"

"Not even! she jumped from the fourth floor banister!"

"No way! No one can jump from that height without getting hurt!"

"Yea... she is really good at the phsyical things but not when it comes to emotional things, like watching a "make you cry" movie or the death of a friend."

"A death of a friend? How that happened?"

"Well this friend of hers was her bodyguard because she was targetted when we lived in America, this guy only died a year ago, and he has been be her side making sure shes safe and what not..." my sister sighs, "I really dont get my sister she is very different than most people.."

"I heard that...." Lenna and her friends kept talking as they got farther away, while I slowed my pace. My sister never really noticed that I really cared about him and cried when I watched him die. Thats when the heavy rain came, I realized that it was my emotions that created that storm so now I barely show my emotions anymore. The only facial expression that i show now is mellow.

"Hey Shi! Wait up!" Thats Li the Commander for the Knights Club. She is about 5'4", she weights maybe 130 lbs. Her hair is black and her eyes are green. She wears a blue skirt, a light blue dress shirt, and a dark blue vest. She was the one that introduced me and my sister to our whole school since "Prince" Al doesnt like to be around the other students even his desk is empty next to me in our classroom.

"Shi, today you get to meet "Prince" Al during yor afternoon classes."

"All afternoon? Why does he want to see me for that long?"

"Well he would like to see if you qualify to be the next "princess" even though hes graduating in a few weeks, you will meet the new "prince" in two weeks from now."

"So basically he wants to see if the new "prince" and I would be good together?"

"I think so."

"Well thats better than listening to the afternoon teachers."

"I knew it! You are a normal person under that "mask" that you are under." Li smiles at me.

"Let me guess there is a rumor going around that I am a heartless human being that doesn't care for anyone?"

"Yeah there is. How do you know that?"

"My sister started it."

"Ah, well I will talk on the P.A. Syatem about starting rumors, we dont want your status as a "princess" ruined before your stated as the new "princesss". Do you mind if I walk with you?"

"No I dont mind. I enjoy having company."

"Oh good. So when did your friend die?"

I stopped and look up at the partly cloudy sky. "He died a year ago tomorrow."

"I'm so sorry. What was his name?

I smiled slightly as I looked back at her and I started to walk again. "Alton Vent."

"Alton Vent!? The guy that helped rescue a girl that was tortured and covered in blood? The guy that helped her walk and talk again? The guy asked her to be his partner up till he died? That means your..."

"I am the girl with no name, no past, and probably no future."

"No future? Thats not true some where out there your really family is looking for you and maybe anybody that you loved in your past."

"Maybe but tomorrow I will have to go to his memorial service that they are broadcasting all over the world.."

"Really? Well i will have everyone in the school watch it in the Auditorium. It will be on channel 10 right? all day starting at nine?"

"Yes to both guestions. And there will be no commericals and there will be a lunch break and by the time school is over it will be over also."

"Good. And do cheer up a little bit. You are very beautiful when you smile." Li said.

"I will remember that." Those words pull at my heart, because Alton said the same thing.

"Come on, I don't want you to be late for class!" Li grabs my hand and runs through the courtyard of Valtic high, she pushed open the doors and runs down the hall to my class room, we stepped in front of the door panting, well I wasnt panting she was, after she got her breathsshe opened the door, the teacher stooped talking and just lookd at us.

"Well Commander Li, I see you brought my missing student."

"Yes I did, Mr. Tamikin, There is a nast rumor going around and Prince Al will not have it. Especially if its about Shi. I will, hopefully, have this rumor taken care of by this after noon." Li bows to Mr. Tamikin and turns areoun and gave me an assuring look and walked away.

"Miss Blackheart please sit down." Mr. Tamikin asked, as soon as I sat down he went back to teaching but I barely payed attention to what he was saying but I took notes. For the rest of the morning up to lunch that what I did. I kept to myself and kept silent. As soon as it was lunchtime I took out my packed lunch and my laptop and surfed on the web while eating my sushi and rice and many goodies that my mother baked for me, of course i mostly sticked to my email, after that I put away my laptop and took out my notebook and wrote my part of the speech for Alton's memorial tomorrow. I stop and think. When I cry onstage nothing happens but when there is barely anyone around me this happen. I finish my lunch and put everything away and sits back and close my eyes listening to my surroundings, listeing to the rumor that spread throughout the whole school. "Thank God that Li is going to clear this up." I said under my breath. I opened my eyes to see that my sister's best friend is sitting next to me.

"Yes?" I asked.

"Hi my name is..."

"Leela, right?"

"Umm... yes."

My expression softened a bit.

"And you have something on your mind?

"Yes I do. And Im sorry about the rumor that going around some people cant keep their mouths shut."

"Its okay. It just shows me, how much my sister want my reputation ruined in this school. This school is suppose to be new start for me and my sister."

"I know, she will hate me for this, but I think you are a fun person to be around and when she started saying these things and started the rumor, well the basic thing is if the person is in the Knight Club you're not sppose to start rumors about them, and I can't be her friend since she did this." said Leela a she looks down at her hands.

"Thank you," she looks up at me smiling at her "Leela your a very kind person and do what you need to do. And I will make sure my sister doesn't ruin your lige, because you came and did the right thing."

"No problem. Well I have to go now." She said as she stood up, I also stood up, we shake hands, and she bows to me and tells me goodbye. She left the room with a smile on her face. I smirked and sat back down and sighs, People can really be healed when someone smiles at you. I thought, as students came back into the classrooms, talking about the rumor and just stood around when the teacher came in, she told the students to sit down, but they just stood there talking until she yelled at everone to sit dowm, then Li came on the P.A system.

"Students of Valtic High, this is Commander Li of the Knight Club, there is a nasty rumor going around and the Knight Club will not tolerate it. If this rumor continues consquences will take place. And they will be severe. Thank you for your time."

"Hmph. Deserves you students right. Rumors are bad and they ruin lives. They will bite back at the person who start them."

Oh they will. I thought. As soon as I get home I am taking her phone, her laptop, her tv, and her Ipod.

"Today we will..." The sliding door is opened by Commander Li, slightly behind her are two males both of them stand about 5'9", one had blonde hair and green eyes, the other has gray hair and dark purple.

"Mrs. Lane, Prince Al would like to speak to Lady Shi for the rest of the day." Li stated, the whole class starts whispering as more rumors begin to start. I get up and remove my book bag from its hook on the side of my desk, opens it and put my note book and pen away.

Author's Note

this is another incomplete story but i am constantly typing so hopefully i will get it done soon, please leave a comment

Reviews

[James Watts]

"twin" (no need for quotations here)

said Lenna very angrily. (want to avoid -ly adverbs tagged to dialogue)

"I will, Bye now we are off to school!!" (avoid this. One exclamation is fine)

As son as I get home I am taking her phone, her laptop, her tv, and her Ipod.(I think you meant As soon as)

Again the biggest thing is depth of story. With so much dialogue you will lose many readers as we do not get to see your world or are we able to relate with the characters. This is a very nice story idea, just needs a little work on the overall structure and delivery. Just keep up the hard work because this has a lot of potential.