Syllables of my Past

This is done in a a new style I wanted to try out.

My past makes me feel so dumb

Looking back, I ponder
What could I have done
A simple change
Maybe more
What if
Oh
No
It’s sad

But it’s true
The things I did
Better left unsaid
For I could have been dead
Living a life full of shame.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...Pen on...:)......................