Life

Tears make a path of wet hope

on our face, whilst rolling down.

Representing the road we need to walk,

guiding us through ups and downs.

Softly gaining speed, whilst letting emotions go.

But then, surprisingly freezing in time and standing still.

A gentle sign of moments you’ll never forget.

Strengthening your soul and shaping your life.

As in forever, guiding you through the

hardest moments life could ever take you to.

Reminding you of the happiness that came before,

the sadness that came after, and the joy that

will finish the trip we call life.

Reviews

[DamienHino]

creative poem i enjoyed it good job

[Needy]

Nothing to say but :)

[HappyTaylor]

This is really wonderful. I could read it again and again. My favorite lines are the entire first stanza. Beautiful. Well done. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. People who do not show emotion will blow up and never know emotion or love. The poem was written with skill. The poem told a very good story with some very good wisdom. A outstanding poem.
Coyote