Untitled

 bass up high

eyes down low

steady beat in my throat

shaking fingers on the wheel

freeway to freedom

behind the angry lights of a Neon.

to the bridge of madness.

Author's Note

feedback? :)

Reviews

[Mariel]

First of all, I don't think you should just add stars to your title. If you are unsure of what to call it, just name it "Untitled" or something similar. I like the point of this poem, it's rather original and beautiful. You're a good poet, keep up the good work.

[Victoria]

@ Mariel
thank you! Untitled it is! I'll be sure to think of a name soon :)