wrong brain

a girl told me i don't feel right and i thought about it and that's ok

you say i don't see it

the way that you mean it

but i'll just keep looking

if feelings are fine

and if i can't know it

the way that you show it

maybe that's a good thing

maybe it's my mind

i'm here to endure it

and you can make sure it

gets harder and harder

don't worry i'm fine

i'll walk in back of it

even though i love it

i'll pick up the garbage

that's if you don't mind

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

maybe it's better not to know after a ll..

[emmajoy]

'i'm here to endure it ~ and you can make sure it ~ gets harder and harder ~ don't worry i'm fine '

It's finding that place where you feel comfortable, at home.. able to be who you think you are until evicted. Perhaps. There's a distinct music, meter or whatever to this poem.. makes a repeat easy to complete, to smile at, and, more!

[NotUsinganymore]

Very beautiful poem. I enjoyed it.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha i just have to shake me nog and walk away ;} there are mysteries that will never be disclosed ... ever......................... and if its right ...that's a deep beauty of it :)
E.

[wordman]

well,do we ever know,maybe we`re not supposed to