Blue Rain

Lost love and feeling blue ...

Soft Blue Rain
Graces my face
Like a blue bouquet
Of velvet petals

 

Embraced in love
Laced with hope
My heart is a wheel
Aching to spin

 

A kiss of blue
On cheeks of roses
A twisted heart
Coiled with pain

 

Brazen Lust
To sear the mortals
Seize the soul
And forever haunt

 

More Blue Rain
Is coming today
Discontent and dismayed
In this violet haze

 

©By Gypsy
October 29, 2002 (revisions 2-11)

 

Author's Note

We all know the loss of love :(

Reviews

[JennaMarie]

Love the imagery this piece inspires. The emotions become so clear with your word choices like "velvet petals" and "violet haze". I quite like the short lines, and the break down of the stanzas. Very impressive, incredible job!

[WatashLegend]

I like what you did with this metaphor. Losing a love that meant so much is never easy and the pain seems to linger and linger, great write