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How do I move on,

From the past you held me in?

How do I escape

And pull through

With my mind still intact?

 

Do you sense my confusion?

My conflicted soul

Grasping for air to breath

But always held down

By your shadow

 

You were a game

I never loved you

Yet I seeked you out

In my head it was all

That I deserved to have

 

Now I'm changed

But you keep coming back

Haunting, invading

And guilt slowly creeping

Because I'm in love

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Good one.

You were a game

I never loved you

Yet I seeked you out

In my head it was all

That I deserved to have


Very blunt. Adds power to the poem.

Now that I understand the ending better, I like it even more than before.