His Deceit

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The sky had darkened

My eyes red of hatred

When I walked through the door

I didn’t expect to find him next to you

The secret you kept so well

Was the only truth that existed

In our tragic accidental romance

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

The secret you kept so well

Was the only truth that existed

My favorite lines here. A very powerful expression emphasizing on 'the truth'
So much different than the truth and transparency one seeks in a relationship.

This is a great write.
So much expressed in only 7 lines.

Just what I was looking for.
Thanks for entering it into my contest.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Short but to the point. Great job, I can see how it won!!

[James K. Blaylock]

Very powerful, congrats on the win!

jkb

[wizthom]

truth is the light even when it looks better in the dark,,u and i are thu the same nightmares of great poets in action..peace wizthom