So Far Away

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Morning comes

I open my eyes

I want to give you a smile

But you’re too far away

 

I get these moments

When my heart’s excited

I want to give you a hug

But you’re too far away

 

Yesterday was not good for me

I needed your hand

To keep me from falling

But you were too far away

 

Now I’m alone in this room

Tears pouring out of my eyes

I wished you were here

But still you’re so far away

 

Reviews

[Michael]

Very nice construction here. I like the turn the last line takes. Gives it balance without being too simple. I do have to ask, what is the number?