Hope kills

This was the first poem i ever wrote. i wrote it in 11/08

--love- is a waste
-dreams- cant be accomplished that's why they're dreams
--religion - fails
--violence- the only real emotion
-tears- cleanse the soul
--forgiveness- a gift i don't deserve
-music - the only gift i ever loved
-friends - can abandon you
--girlfriends - can lie
-boyfriends - can cheat
-depression - can be a welcome guest.
-happiness - can drive you to kill
-money - can destroy
--Hope?-can Save?

HOPE- kills

Author's Note

All comments are welcome.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

I can tell you must have been a bit upset when you wrote this, though i can be wrong. Your point of view is very well expressed, your way of seeing things is different from most, maybe. But that didnt stop you from saying what you felt.

Keep up the good work :D

[Valentine]

How old were you at the time of your first write? Sometimes an event in our lives start our pen or pencil flowing..Glad you are sticking with writing..lol avn God bless..Valentine

[Aradie Rain]

Very goo for a first poem, I have to agree with most of what you say here

[Taylor H.]

this is too emo for my taste. But im sure others will like it

[Jae]

its so sad. it reminds me of a friend who thought like this.
its a great poem, awsome job
and you caught such emotion.

~Rem

[Shutterbug]

This is very good and very interesting. It tell me alot about you by the answers that you put down.