happiness

Thought i should write something. but not really flowing today...

She's not a girl who misses much.
I cant stand alone.
Breathing just isn't enough.

Some days i cant just bare.
That your with him.

Memories will not suffice.
Forget the past.
I'm holding on,
but i don't know how long I'll last.

Happiness comes and goes.
A star that barely shows.
A feeling and sign that nobody knows.

Memories.. I let go of those.

Author's Note

I know its not my best but all comments are welcome..

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Nice use of metaphor. I discovered you by using the Discover button. Timeless yearning for that long lost love....

[Raven Radke]

Good for such a short passage!

[AllyKinzz:)]

The line about the star that bareley shows, i like that one. Good metaphor.

Short and to the point. I like your style of writing. I would love to read more of them.

:D

[Taylor H.]

this is a great poem. the last line is a great way to end it.

[Aradie Rain]

Memories can be hard to let go of. I can relate to that as well.
~Aradie