Broken

venting

Broken Dreams.
A girl that I will never know,
again. Love is remembered
from her broken touch. If only I..
could break free..
from her..,
I wouldn't hurt so much..
Hear all my pleas..

But they'll never Due.
My hoarse throat,
these dry cracked lips,
This sore, scarred tongue.
could never...

They could never reach
this height of expectation..

Can i hate myself.

Can i hate myself?
For pushing my feelings
aside. Helping what
what i know can't be,
Denied?

Dear autumn green eyed Girl.

                _A summer cant, Shouldn't feel this cold. Where can i let all of this just crash and burn.. Where can I let go? How could this effect anyone but me. My broken heart is no where other than lost at sea... I finally understand how fragile, Pathetic, How in so incredibly  WEAK...I am. My heart is my promise. A broken promise never heals. Your heart seems to never really feel_

Keep Running from me,
never turning to see a boy.
Breaking in his,

-DREAMS-

Author's Note

just me venting.. tell what you think about my thoughts. all comments and reviews are welcome. good or bad.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

It seems to me your having a bit of trouble letting go of "someone" or "somting"
Am i correct?

The wording here is good, really made me feel what you were feeling in a way. Keep it up. Dont worry, when you vent sometimes the best way is to write it down. And you have no problem with that one :D

Keep it up.

[Valentine]

You are coming on great..all you need is to start punctuating like I told you before..You have strong ideas..just put them properly on paper..Nice deep feelings..Valentine

[Micah_s5]

another good one man.

[Impulse]

I like the way you set the poem up. It's very unique. And yes, it is ridiculously hard to let someone go. It just takes a little time. You captured the feeling quite nicely. Perfect piece =]

[Marissa]

You certainly have a way with words. All of your poems flow really nicely. Please keep writing more!

[ZmH]

i love the ending where your writing to the autumn green eyed girl

[Lexi =]]

Great Poem! You expressed yourself very well![:

[Taylor H.]

very good poem. Its sad and im happy you found a way to let your feellings out. great job.