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Your Just another flaw.
Something to be remembered in a scar.
Just a f*****g stain in a car.
Another pain cured in a blunt.

You turned breaking my heart into a hunt.

Just another summer tragedy.
Another scream to prove to me...
I was always wrong.
You never regret.

f**k it, here's the breakdown
(Clears throat) ehhh hem.
This is past all consequence.
Scarring becomes damned irrelevant.
Bleeding tongues drown my sorrows away.
A shot of Jack brings your memories to slay.
And you i thought you remembered.
 
Feeling, its getting old.
Make me numb, pop a pill,
drink a bottle and remember still.
Your picture is like eating lead.
Burn my tongue with the words never said.

Ears aren't worth your lies.
And I'm finished; with you.
With singing fake three worded lullabies.
so ill cut it into two.
F**k you!

Author's Note

reviews. go for it.

Reviews

[Jae]

very expressive. a lot of anger and sorrow. but this is very memorable. i loved it.

~Rem

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I liked it a lot. I can understand what if feels like to go through that. I have been through many things that I don't like going through it is really hard. I know that many people go through a lot, but they don't always deserve it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[indieRokker]

Just another summer tragedy.
^^ Loved that bit, their are to much cliche's about Summe rbeing love, happiness and yet you brought a sense of tragedy into it. Something different. Love the concept. Mad skills Matt, deep too ;)

indie♥

[Vannah]

It's really good. great read.

[Jennika has a short att..]

Naw I loves it

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Its really interesting ^-^ nice write

[OkieWonKenokie]

Wow! I like this. A lot of emotion in this and the rhyming pattern is a tad interesting but Great Write!

[Matt]

wait so are you saying its bad?

[Jennika has a short att..]

Haha so I'll cut it into two. F**k you! Nice I couldn't stop laughing at the seriousness of it.