Collide.

Collide.

A Poem by vido.
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A car crash in few words.

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Through windshields
and crushed glass,
he had never seen such beauty
until it crashed into his car.

© 2015 vido.


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I want it to be a beautiful woman that came through the windshield. Maybe he's drunk? Maybe it's dark? MAn, I could muse on this all day. Clen prose, well choices, good job dude!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Whatever that beauty was, it sure made a impact.
Serious or satirical, yo've brought an interest to mind and a smile to face with this brief composition.

Thank you for both! ⁓ Richard

Posted 10 Years Ago


sharp and clean...well penned and thought provoking...

Posted 10 Years Ago


An interesting take on an accident... beauty in the chaos... like the double play on the word collide, too: a collision of vehicles and of thoughts...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Louise Vido. 21. "Sometimes I can hear my bones under the weight of all the lives I'm not living." It is a profound thing to feel so very deeply. www.louiseplace.com more..