My Forever Knight

Knowing you belong with someone and they are all the things you would ever need

          My Forever Knight
Free me oh brave knight,
With the shiniest of swords,
Cut down my enemies with a swipe of your blade,
And with barely a word steal me away,
Upon your swiftest steed,
Away with me you ride.

 

Write me a verse sweet poet,
Say words to me that will never belong to another,
Bring tears to my eyes and kiss them away,
Bury me within your scented embrace,
Like the calmest of seas ,
Let me dance on your shore.

 

Build me a home dear lover,
Where our children's laughter,
Rival that of the greatest symphonies,
Nod your head contentedly ,
With a smile on your face,
As you let  me talk forever about everything and nothing.

 

Now you my brave knight,
Who recites prose and built me a home,
I bask in your reality,
Never worried that your love will falter,
Never happier than in your arms,
Never complete when you are not here.

                                 by vidya

Author's Note

Something different don't know if it is any good so please let me know.

Reviews

[magenta24uk]

I think this seems to show an underlying need to be rescued by our love and kept safe. We all need to feel that love and to Hero worship our chosen partner is no bad thing as long as we except their faults as well. In poetry we can forget the faults and live the fantasy. Nice.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much:)

[Rod Dangers]

Very much enjoyed this.
At first it through me to have the title so close to the opening line. But reading the piece, I very much enjoyed and picture your words.
Thanks for sharing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Much thanks Rod:)

[Frieda P]

Enchanting Vidya...who doesn't want the white Knight poet to write them sweet poethery as you dance on their shores...charming my friend!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Exactly Freida my dear My hopeless romantic side had a go with my pen.Thank you very much

[ZeniaK]

I love the ye old english feel to this poem with the way you wrote it. A very romantic and sweet poem that I enjoyed reading. Cheers Vidya, great job!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you ZeniaK I did enjoy writing this one :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One feels and encapsulating set of arms after reading this piece, safety and warmth, well done, good read.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Thomas it is nice to know we are safe in the arms of the one we love:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Your words are true. We need to feel safe and loved. I like the purpose and reason for the poem. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Coyote for your very kind review :)

[Praveeta]

Your poem seems like a modern version of Shakespeare's plays. Well penned my dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you my friend :)

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome :)

[Lyn Anderson]

A shade sappy for me, but lovely write as always. There is an extra space in the last line, third stanza - I have yet to catch more than that :) Your friendly neighbourhood grammarian.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you KL.I sadly like a little sappy sometimes.I am glad as always to be visited by our own superhero The friendly neighbourhood grammarian.:)