I won't be.

I dunno :)

                                      I Won't Be.

Who gave you permission,

To enter my heart ?

And now like a vampire,

I can't keep you out.

I won't be impressed ,

By the way that you love me,

The way your body knows mine,

How they fit together like pieces of a puzzle.

I won't confess the way you make me tremble,

Or the way I yearn for you,

When you aren't here,

Or the satisfaction I get from making you mine.

I need to be the victor,

So why do I bend to your will ?

Without a single protest,

I accept you and everything you promise.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Frieda P]

You got it bad sista....oh to be so passionate, I really like the pull & push of this one, reminds me of sex....did I say that out loud, oopsie, sure did miss you and your works of art! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh reminds you of sex does it lol ,Thank you chica.Everything reminds me of sex so there is that :)

[Frieda P]

Oh you're just a trembling mess of a puzzle hon, I see nothing has changed! haha ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha seasons may change but not I lol

[redflutterby]

Sigh...that longing to be in control but ultimately succumbing to the other. Your words are perfect and the feeling shines through. Wonderful write Vidya...;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Red :)

[New Theory]

Lose yourself to passion, dont resist and that is why its amazing

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Theory :)

[New Theory]

you are welcome :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

WOW!!!!! You shouldn't have to be all the things you are not, You shouldn't have to spill it all that hits so hard like a know , Be you always:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww you so sweet Jon.Thank you very much :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

I try smilesssssssssssssssss your welcome my dear friend:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Vidya Bacchus]

Miles of smiles :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Yes miles of ever lasting smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh my, sometimes I feel like we are living in that weird parallel universe. There are several of you out there, and it is strange when I almost sense you invading my thoughts. I must have so many of those poems, that doubt, that impossible to say no sensation ... well done.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes cat we are very much alike.You knew this.Great minds and all that lol.Thank you so much for giving me this lovely compliment :)

[willweb]

This poem was filled with a longing for a love you seem unsure of. This was excellent. You meaning is very clear and I loved this. Your are very talented.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Will :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love hits us when we least expect it and once it does we end up dazed and confused until we are completely lost in the wilderness of affection.

[MsJewel]

Who gave you permission,
To enter my heart ?
You had me with the first line...love is a mystery and you have captured that so well...the unexplainable attraction and connection we feel for another..

A stunning poem my friend. Absolutely stunning.
:) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much Jules :)

[Woody]

what if your body knew mine?
so our bodies fit together like pieces of a puzzle. big deal!
no, I won't confess the way you make me tremble.
Oh, Vidya! women are so weak!
but that's what makes them so sweet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh hush Woody women are very strong and still very sweet lol.Thank you Sir Woody your words always make me smile :)

[Woody]

it is such a beautiful poem but, you know me, I like to pull your leg :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I know and I look forward to said leg pulling :)